M.I.C Rairiaro

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M.I.C Rairiaro

Postby shatishamararie on Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:49 pm

Sorry i haven't finished it but here's the beginning...

M.I.C. Rairiaro

Prologue
Somewhere in Metropolis U.F.F.R. A boy lays unconicious on the road after being hit by a speeding car. Soon afterwards, he is found by a docter by the name of Sanzo. Sanzo takes the boy in to try and save him, though after great ordeal, he has no choice, and transforms the boy into a robot.

Ch.1 Lost memories

Boy: Huh?... Where am I? What's going on? Wh..why can't I move?

Later on...

Tap...tap...tap

Dr.Sanzo: He's coming to...
Assistant: Yes, you're right.

(The boys eyes open)

Boy: Aaaaahhhh!
Dr.Sanzo: It's all right you're in safe hands.
Boy: You're not lying to me are you?
Dr.Sanzo: No I promise...
Assistant: Dr.Sanzo, I don't want to rush you in any way, though I think now is a good time to tell the boy what happened.
Dr.Sanzo: Yes...sigh...well, boy, I have some bad news. You're no longer a human. You're a robot.
Boy: What are you talking about?
Dr.Sanzo: Here...

(Holds up a mirror to the boys face.)

Boy: Huh? What's so inportant about my reflection?
Dr.Sanzo: Look closely at your eyes...now look at mine. See how they are diffrent?
Boy: yeah...
Dr.Sanzo: It may not be much, though, that is the only proof. Other than the inside of your body, that prooves that you are a robot.
Boy: ...But why?! ...Why do I have to be a robot... I don't want to be one!!!!

(The boy starts crying.)

Dr.Sanzo: I'm sorry, there was nothing else that I could do...You...You were just lying there. Dying at the side of the road.


To be continued...
Last edited by shatishamararie on Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:05 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: M.I.C Rairiaro

Postby Nano Fruit on Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:09 pm

This story sounds interesting so far. I really wonder what's going to happen next. I hope that's not it for the first chapter, because it is kind of short.
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