Golem (Opinions Please)

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Golem (Opinions Please)

Postby PanicAtTheInkWard on Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:50 pm

Golem

A Sci Fi/Fantasy Story about the future of Earth.

Plot- The year is 2012, natural disasters are becoming more and more evident. The awakening of the Gaia Maiden, Haruna, is causing it to worsen. The end of the world is near.

Characters:

Hiroshis Group-

Haruka, Hiroshi- The main character, grew up in Osaka, just moved to Tokyo. He has the ability to unlock the ' Golem ' program. He is sweet obsessed and often very clueless.

Yamishita, Katsu- The female lead, she is the daughter of a rich man and is constantly being put in the middle of battles by Ai. She is very realistic, she possessed the Program ' Inferno '

Mana- A young man who's name is unknown, he was found by a rescue team after his home town, San Fransico, was destroyed by a Tsunami. He has no memories of the event and is a member of a radical enviromentalist group.

Gyouza's Group-

Ren- A young boy who was framed for his mothers murder, he is working under Gyouza to destroy all the Codes and Programs. He can unlock Code ' Gargoyle ', and is the human host of Ao.

Himawari- A young woman hired by Gyouza, she is a tracker and has the ability to see the data of Codes and Programs. She is a trained assisan as well.

Gyouza- A man who goes by a code name, he is the one in charge of destroying the Codes and Programs, he doesn't have one himself.

Harunas Group-

Haruna- A silent being who resides inside a cave that leads to many riches. She was sent to sleep after the last great extinction, and has awoken to continue her duty as the destroyer of life.

Ai- An earth being who dresses in classical clothing, she has the ability to grant Codes and Programs, but only to those who are compadible with them. She uses Katsu as a body since she does not have her own psychical form. She is known as the Codex.

Ao- A sky being who dressed modernly, he is Ai's ' Little Brother ' and has the ability to temporarly seal away Codes and Programs. However he must be inside his human hosts body to do this. He uses Ren as a human host. He is against what Haruna is attempting to do.

Here is the link to the drawings of the characters-
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Can you all tell me your oppinions? This is the first Manga I'm really serious about.
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Re: Golem (Opinions Please)

Postby Lilli10779 on Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:01 am

This topic is moved to Scifi Story forum under Story Teller Space, but the post can still be seen in Graphic Story forum.
Just to let all writers know, Story Teller Space is the place for you if there's only text but no graphics to be posted. :D
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Re: Golem (Opinions Please)

Postby Nano Fruit on Sat Feb 14, 2009 10:46 am

Wow.
This story idea seems well thought out. I really want to know what happens. It seems really interesting. The characters sketches are still kind of fuzzy though. The story makes me want to know more. I hope you continue. I'll be looking forward to it!
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