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Providential Prism

Postby KamiYugure on Tue Jan 06, 2009 10:36 pm

I have begun work on a rewrite, that I one day intend to perhaps sell. So, for reasons of protecting my story and its plot and characters, I am removing all pieces of it from every corner of the web that it has graced. Thank you and good bye.

Look for it, in the future... I am considering publishing it as a webnovel...

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Re: Providential Prism

Postby Lilli10779 on Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:02 pm

I like your writing, the story seems about to get very interesting. If I have to be critical, I think maybe you can make the description of the character's outfit a little shorter.
I have a suggestion, if you are looking to make the story a comic, maybe you can start with a contest with the character design. It will be very interesting to see different designs out of different artist for the same character. Once the character images get more specific on the paper, it will generate a lot more interest to people who like this story and want to work with it. ^^
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Re: Providential Prism

Postby Lilli10779 on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:57 pm

Actually my mermaid story was not my own, but written by one best friend from high school. For so many years I try to finish it but only got pieces done... getting a whole story done is really not easy, especially not doing it as a full-time manga artist. 8-)
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Re: Providential Prism

Postby KamiYugure on Thu Jan 08, 2009 3:59 pm

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Re: Providential Prism

Postby KamiYugure on Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:44 am

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Re: Providential Prism

Postby ReidV2 on Fri Jan 30, 2009 1:47 am

I would reply tonight but, Ive done two criticisms already, and I planned to sleep like 45 minutes ago.
I'll read it in school and critique it by tomorrow night. Haha, though the plot and premise seem interesting, I'm already seeing things I want to tackle and discuss. Be ready!
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Re: Providential Prism

Postby KamiYugure on Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:33 am

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Re: Providential Prism

Postby dreamingofwings02 on Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:37 am

:!: please finish, i'm so dying to read the rest of this! And, i think that you could stand to have an editor..maybe...because i've noticed little things like except for the word accept and things like that. just a thought.
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Re: Providential Prism

Postby KamiYugure on Thu Apr 23, 2009 9:16 pm

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Re: Providential Prism

Postby KamiYugure on Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:10 am

Once again, I have begun work on a rewrite, that I one day intend to perhaps sell. So, for reasons of protecting my story and its plot and characters, I am removing all pieces of it from every corner of the web that it has graced. Thank you and good bye.

Look for it, in the future... I am considering publishing it as a webnovel...

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