A New Story of Ours by TWO

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A New Story of Ours by TWO

Postby The_Wondering_Otaku on Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:01 am

Hi. As seen, my user name is The_Wondering_Otaku, but for all my stories, I go by TWO. I would like to have drawn this story out as a manga, but I don't have a printer, scanner, or a copier, so this is how it will be. :mrgreen: If anyone is reading, then feel free to comment by PM and post in poll. It will help me continue if you like it. So, on wards!

A New Story of Ours
by TWO


Prologue


"Fríđr Eydís!!!" A voice echoed through her, making her open her eyes and turn to her ást, seeing him as his tears anxiously waited for release. ".....Stígandr--" The wounds again recieved a higher pain. "Fríđr Eydís!!!" Stígandr called, reaching for the glow of the lunar green. "...sed-ā-je, Stígandr...!!" Fríđr Eydís gasped, her tears freely fell out of the globe and onto the earth," Stígandr.....rinna......" Stígandr gritted his teeth,"Kʷa-s-ir, Fríđr Eydís?!?" Fríđr Eydís smiled,"......I.....am......skilnað......" Stígandr eyes widenned," NEINN!!!!! Fríđr Eydís!!! Yu cann nott!! Fríđr Eydís!!!!" Fríđr Eydís smiled again, her body began to glow to another wound appeared, its pain recieved," Stígandr....i-tā-je........kʷe.....mati...vel......" The glow of the lunar green shined the globe and Fríđr Eydís. As both Fríđr Eydís and Stígandr screamed, Fríđr Eydís's body turned blinding and dissappeared into Globe's Faries and lunar butterflies flew past Stígandr, causing the hidden tears to fall,"....Fríđr Eydís....mativel...yet......men Brigantī............Fríđr Eydís......." Stígandr's eyes turned neon and black," DEYJA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He screamed, facing those that had shot his Fríđr Eydís, his ást, to death. The wounds that had hit her soon turned to him, but no pain could wither what was already disintegrating, killing his heart and soul that he had earned right now. His eyes completed their transformations has he charged at them. "......I'll hitta yo ati....Fríđr Eydís," He thought as he closed his eyes, picturing her as he slammed his body into them, his body dissappeared as well on this planet, Ástriđr-Ula. A planet with closed eyes....
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Re: A New Story of Ours by TWO

Postby Lilli10779 on Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:40 pm

I want to read more. Now the story is a little blurry to me because it just started. :D
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Re: A New Story of Ours by TWO

Postby EchoLi on Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:49 pm

I am a novel person, totally support original writings >o<
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Re: A New Story of Ours by TWO

Postby The_Wondering_Otaku on Fri Jan 02, 2009 11:49 pm

thank you! Also to say, I couldn't decide on the proper place of this story, genre wise and setting wise in the story, so if the names confuse you, they are fictious names. It will get better , I promise. Also, feel free to give ideas as well. It helps me to continue! :mrgreen: I will be posting it on quizilla.com under the User name Furubafandom, but if anyone knows a better way on this site to get er...long stories on it, please tell me.
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