Mermaid Series - 1 - 2p

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Mermaid Series - 1 - 2p

Postby Lilli10779 on Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:55 pm

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These are the pieces of a long story that I started working on from first year of highschool. But don't get confused, the story is actually old fashion and predictatble. I will post some follow-ups to explain the main story line. :mrgreen:

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Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 2
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby EchoLi on Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:15 pm

Old love story~~ ;)
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby Lilli10779 on Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:44 pm

This is also in the gallery :mrgreen:
We will find a better way to post comics on this site. So far just leave it like this.
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby Zero_Shanks on Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:44 am

Whoa! That's some really good art!
Something here soon....
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby Legend on Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:30 am

whoa you drew that? really nice.
i still cant figure out how you get those effects...
you doing them on the computer?
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby Lilli10779 on Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:54 pm

Thanks guys~
I did not use the computer at that time, because ... I was a poor high school student at that time and could not afford one!!! My very dark past ..><..
It was hell a lot of work, and the screens (shadows) was cut out of a whole piece of paper and glued into the original drawing, very traditional and cheap way, takes forever and so easy to mess up...
But I will never do this again now --- because I have my Dear PC and Scanner~~ Hahaha~~~
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby KamiYugure on Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:54 pm

Ah... it would seem that you were inspired by the little mermaid. Except this story (as well as your main lady) are much darker, which is awesome. Your art is very detailed and well-developed, and I am interested in this story. The only thing that I can really think of to comment on, is the typos. You've got a few misspelled words and extra letters on the ends of words. That shouldn't be too hard to fix, though.

You did a really good job! Keep up the good work!

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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby StrawberryPie1 on Sat Jan 10, 2009 1:54 pm

sounds and looks good so far.... I must ask where you got your inspiration from? Did it just pop up in yourhead one day out of nowhere? or was there something you saw that influenced the idea?

Anyways great, awesome, cool comic :)


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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby Lilli10779 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:45 pm

StrawberryPie1 wrote:sounds and looks good so far.... I must ask where you got your inspiration from? Did it just pop up in yourhead one day out of nowhere? or was there something you saw that influenced the idea?

Anyways great, awesome, cool comic :)


Bye for now,
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Thanks for the comments~ ^^
Actually this story is not originated by me, but a good friend of mine form high school. I promised him to make his story into graphic novels one day, and since then I got stuck on finishing it. Haha~ These comics you saw here were about 8~9 years old, while I was still in highs school, because the story was not a short one, so that time I decided to get some pieces done first just to get a taste of it. I will post other pieces later. Even today I am still working on the very same story, and hoping I will eventually tie all the pieces together and make the story a whole. ><
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Re: Pieces of My Mermaid stories - Post 1

Postby MoonlightShadow on Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:01 am

Ur really good!
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